Monday, March 29, 2021
Brain Food for Writers by Connie Vines
Tuesday, March 23, 2021
It's National Puppy Day! by Connie Vines #National Puppy Day
Monday, March 22, 2021
Travel the World without Leaving Your Kitchen--Czech Potato Dumplings by Connie Vines
Served with sauerkraut or gravy |
We all have family recipes passed down from generation-to-generation. Each week I've tried prepare one recipe from my childhood. I also send my grands family photos from 'the old country' and a bit of family-lore to share when they are adults and families of their own.
This week it was Czech Potato Dumplings.
My maternal grandmother's family emigrated from Czechoslovakia in the late-1890s. My great-grandmother was from Bohemia (the westernmost and largest historical region of the modern-day Czech Republic). Bohemians, like all Czech are Slavic. Bohemia was recognized as the Dutch of Bohemia around 870 AD. She, her husband and children boarded a ship to cross the Atlantic to Ellis Island, settling in the Czech area of Chicago, IL.
Potato Dumplings, peach dumplings, Koláče, and yeast breads, were the foods when my grandmother and aunt came for an extended visit.
Ingredients |
I will post the ingredients and a link to a YouTube link for a detailed demo by a Czech home-cook. Spoken in English.
Her recipe differs from mine a little (I don't use Wonder flour) but there is no difference in taste.
after refrigeration over night ingredients are lightly kneed l |
Then formed in to 2 large dumplings |
Sliced and served on a large platter |
Click here to listen to Anton Lada (my relative) and the "Louisiana 5"--the first band ever to go on tour.
https://secondhandsongs.com/artist/78812/works
Click here to listen and watch traditional Czech music and dance
I hope you enjoyed today's mini-vaca from the warmth of your own kitchen.
As the Czechs say: Rodina je jedním z mistrovských děl přírody. -
"The family is one of nature's masterpieces."
Saturday, March 20, 2021
How to Develop Tension in Your Writing by Connie Vines #RR #RR82 #WritingTips
How do you develop tension in your writing?
RR#82 |
Thank you Robin for this month's topic :)
I believe creating tension in a novel (or short-story) is a skill which is always been honed and re-invented by an author.
The genre of fiction or even non-fiction often denotes the type of tension you develop when you are writing. However, these are the go-to questions I ask myself when I am writing and revising my stories:
First and foremost, your characters must be people your readers will like and relate to.
Have I created a conflict crucial to your characters. ...
Are my characters engaging characters with opposing goals. ...
Remember to keep raising the stakes. ...
Allow tension to ebb and flow. ...
Keep making the reader ask questions. ...
Create internal and external conflict. ...
Create secondary sources of tension. ...
Make the story unfold in a shorter space of time.
Also:
Master the art of pacing. ...
Time your tension effectively. ...
Introduce exponential tension. ...
Consider using cliffhangers: at the end of a scene or at the end of a chapter.
Throw out those extra words (adverbs). Verbs = Action.
Examples in my writing:
Excerpt from "Brede" Rodeo Romance, Book 2
With and unexpected flash of recall cam a feeling of success. Only the joy was gone al too quickly, blotted out by something else that hovered at the edge of her consciousness. Dark and menacing, it pressed down on her like a thunderhead in the moments before a cloudburst.
She remembered the darkness...
Excerpt from "Lynx" Rodeo Romance, Book 1
Coming out of chute number 5 is Lynx Maddox, the "Wild Cat"...atop Widow-Maker. This cowboy hails from Amarillo, Texas. Let's give him a big Montana welcome."
Everything seemed to move in slow motion. The heavy thud of hooves to the ground. The animal's labored breathing and the clang of the cowbell filled Lynx's head as his butt was pounded against the bull's back. His spine compressed with every jolt.
Helluva way to make a living, he thought, fighting to remain upright. Infuriated, the bull jerked its head from side to side, rolled his eyes, and suddenly aimed a horn at Lynx's leg.
The Brahman had changed his tactics, Lynx realized, his arm pulling hard at the socket as he fought against gravity. Exhaling a heavy snort, the animal dropped its head forward and blasted toward the center of the arena, Lynx knew he was in trouble, big time. . .
Excerpt from "Tanayia--Whisper upon the Water" Native American/First Peoples Series, Book 1
1868
The Governor of New Mexico decreed that all Indian children over the age of six be educated in the ways of the white man.
Indian Commissioner, Thomas Morgan, said: It was cheaper to educate the Indians than to kill them.
1880, Apacheria, Season of Ripened Berries
Isolated bands of colored clay on white lime-stone remained where the sagebrush was stripped from Mother Earth by sudden storms and surface waters. Desolate. Bleak. A land of barren rocks and twisted paths that reached out into the silence.
A world of hunger and hardship. This is my world. I am Tanayia. I was born thirteen winters ago. My people and I call ourselves "Nde" this means "The People". The white man calls us Apache....
I hope you enjoyed this month's topic.
Remember to complete the blog hop and see what my cohorts have divulged (we all love secrets) about developing tension in their writing.
Happy Reading and Writing,
Connie
Marci Baun http://www.marcibaun.com/blog/
Dr. Bob Rich https://wp.me/p3Xihq-2fU
Skye Taylor http://www.skye-writer.com/blogging_by_the_sea
Victoria Chatham http://www.victoriachatham.com
Connie Vines http://mizging.blogspot.com/ (You are here now)
Diane Bator http://dbator.blogspot.ca/
Rhobin L Courtright http://www.rhobincourtright.com
Monday, March 15, 2021
Happy (almost) St. Patrick's Day! By Connie Vines
Monday, March 1, 2021
Breakfast on the Go! by Connie Vines
Why it this a favorite of mine?
- It's transportable
- It's make-a-head and freezable.
- It is loaded with protein and yummy.
Breakfast Egg Cups Recipe
Serves: 8
Prep Time: 10 m
Cook Time: 20 m
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Ingredients
1 – cooking spray
6 large – egg
1/4 cup – milk
1/8 teaspoon – salt
1/8 teaspoon – black pepper, ground
1 medium – bell pepper, red
3/4 cup – spinach
1/4 cup – cheddar cheese, shredded
Directions
Spray a muffin tin with cooking spray and set aside. Preheat oven to 375°F.
Whisk the eggs and milk together in a bowl. Season with salt and pepper.
Dice the bell pepper into small pieces. Stack the spinach leaves, roll them up, and slice them thin. (This method is called chiffonade.)
Add the peppers, spinach, and shredded cheddar to the egg mixture.
Fill muffin cups 3/4 full and bake for 20-25 minutes until centers are set and no longer runny.
Allow to cool slightly before serving.
Extras may be stored in an air-tight container in the refrigerator for up to a week or in a freezer-safe container in the freezer for up to a month. Microwave thawed egg cups on high for 45-60 seconds or until hot.
Nutrition Facts
NUTRITION PER SERVING% DAILY VALUE
Calories: 78 4%
Fat: 5 g 8%
Carb: 1 g 0%
Fiber: 0 g 0%
Protein: 6 g 12%
Sugar: 1 g
You may add different veggies, meats, cheeses, to your personal preference. You may also use a cupcake liner instead of oil or non-stick cooking spray..
Enjoy!
Connie