Doesn’t it stop you cold when a
character just doesn’t fit into a story?
Let’s face it - while reading or watching a movie – hasn’t this occurred
to you? I know it has me. I’ll blink my eyes and frown – first thought
in my mind is, “really? Would he/she
really say or react that way?”
It’s not a good thing! I’m not fascinated or even amused – I’m truly
irritated, frustrated, and sometimes even ticked-off. My time, after all is precious and I hate
feeling like I’ve wasted it.
We have expectations as a reader or
movie watcher. We are caught up in the
story – we are experiencing what the characters are feeling . . . and we want
what they want … then crash! We are
handed an ‘out-of-character’ breach that leaves us scratching our heads. Let’s be honest – that character just would not
have done that … or said that… or reacted that way. We feel we know him/her and now we are
totally disappointed, let-down, and frustrated.
As writers, we should never let this
happen. Oh characters are entitled to
shock us, surprise us, and even disappoint us – but they must learn something
from it and they have to in some way share what they’ve learned. Our characters can’t be perfect . . . but we do
expect them to ‘stay in-character.’
Have you ever been told or have you
told someone else, “What’s wrong, you’re not yourself today?” I’ll bet you have. Well the same thing can happen to our
characters – and believe me your reader will recognize it immediately. Something
must be up! If there is ‘no reason’ for
this strange or uncharacteristic behavior, then the reader will conclude you
(the writer) has failed – the character is now unbelievable. You never want that to happen.
It breaks down to the writer making
sure the reader understands why there is a change in your character. Did he/she just find out they have a
tumor? Did his/her brother end up in
jail? Did he/she get drunk and end up
revealing some life-threatening information?
Is he/she afraid of commitment?
Maybe the reader doesn’t really know
the character as well as they thought.
He/she has an underlying secret. It’s
a great way to surprise the reader – sometimes it even surprises the writer. We learn about our characters as our story
unfolds – and often times their personality unfolds with the story.
But – you can’t just drop red
herrings and expect the reader to buy it. The trick or challenge here is creating
characters we care about, believe we know and are rooting for — but retain the element
of surprise – taking the reader with you.
Once we understand or are privy to
the reasoning behind a character’s confusing behavior, we can accept it, even
be excited about the change in character or direction of the story. Make sure all uncharacteristic behavior is
explainable. If you don’t – it’s just
bad writing.
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