My novel, an historical adventure with romantic elements set in England during the French Revolution, grew to almost 200,000 words. I finally agreed that I had to cut back my story. But even with cuts, it was still unwieldy, so I broke it into two novels. The first and larger section, set in England, became The False Light, published two years ago by Eternal Press to excellent reviews. The Historical Novel Society called it “Simply brilliant.”
The second portion, which takes place in sultry New Orleans then in war-torn France, became Without Refuge, and was released in March of this year. The difficult task was to put enough info (backstory) into this second novel to make it understandable to readers who might not have read the first book, though I hope they go back and read The False Light.
Here’s a blurb for Without Refuge:
~In 1796, ruined countess Bettina Jonquiere leaves England after the reported drowning of her lover, Everett. In New Orleans she establishes a new life until a ruthless Frenchman demands the money stolen by her father at the beginning of the French Revolution. She is forced on a dangerous mission to France where she unravels dark family secrets, but will she find the man she lost as well?~
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Note from Ginger: I've read both of Diane's novels and they are well-written and captivating. I never expected to find English and French history so entertaining, but this author's blend of descriptions, details, and characters who are real and believable drew me in and held me captive until the last pages. Of course, then I wanted more despite her admirable ability to create a manuscript of over 200,000 words and make it into two novels that still needed paring down to meet publishing standards. Go figure! IMHO, Diana Gabaldon has nothing on Diane Scott Lewis.
I urge you to put her on your TBR list.
Ginger, thank you for hosting me today and for your very kind words. You are always so supportive of your fellow and sister writers.
ReplyDeleteDiane is one of my favorite authors and reading her work improves mine! Id love to be in the drawing for this book. Thank you Ginger and Diane.
ReplyDeleteYour books sound fascinating. I happen to like the French Revolution and became interested in it after reading Nostrodamus' predictions. That is a really smart idea-writing a huge novel and turning it into two. Both books are something I would buy. Dina Rae
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your success! I look forward to reading your books to see how you accomplished the division. I had the same dilemma with "The Shakespeares and the Crown". I decided to break it where William leaves Stratford and goes to London; because his life was so different in those locations, I felt I was able to skip most of that heavy backstory. Working in enough backstory to make things logical without bogging down your writing would seem to be quite a challenge. Cheers, Don Maker
ReplyDeleteYour stories sound fascinating and I can't wait to read one of your books. Oddly enough I was on Eternal Press's website earlier and kept getting stuck on The False Light. I'll definitely have to order it now.
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