Blame It On The Stars
When she got home and
pushed her garage door opener, she saw Steve’s BMW. “Damn it!” She slapped her
dash board, and parked on the street. “Well, he can just come and get it.” She
closed the garage door, and dropped the opener in her pocket. She hauled her
suitcases up to the front door, and went in.
She threw herself on her
bed, but realized her pillow smelled like Steve. For some reason that made her
want to cry, but she wasn’t ready to cry yet. She was too angry.
Catlin unpacked and
puttered around her house. The phone rang three separate times, but she never
answered it. Finally, two hours later, her doorbell rang. She peeked out and
saw Steve on the steps. She opened the door, unsmiling.
“Can I come in?” He asked
quietly. He was not smiling either.
“Not even if my hair was
on fire,” she replied. “And you held the only bucket of water on Earth.”
He nodded. “David dropped
me off.”
She stared at him.
“I came to pick up my car.”
“Well, duh.” She leaned
against her door frame.
“Catlin, I—”
She cut him off. “I think
I’ve heard just about enough out of you today. You’re on my turf now, and if
you want your car, you’re going to listen to me for a minute.”
“Well—” he started.
She jumped in again. “No!
I’m talking now. Don’t you ever speak to me like you did today. I am not your
child, and I won’t be spoken to in that tone.” She poked him in the chest with
her finger. “If you want to fight, we’ll fight. I’ll go nose to nose with you.
But cut out that condescending bullshit and I mean it.”
“If you don’t want to be
spoken to like a child, then maybe you shouldn’t act like a child.”
She shook her head. “Are
you serious? I don’t think I was acting like a child. Okay, I made a mistake. I
knew better than to listen in. But I did not encourage Dana to do so.
She fell into that room on purpose, by the way.”
Steve looked surprised,
and Catlin continued. “And how dare you tell me that your conversation
was none of my business? We’ve been together for a month now. Haven’t you
figured out that what affects you, affects me? I love you, and I’m tired of
that feeling not being reciprocated.”
He said slowly, “A month
is not twenty-one years, Catlin.”
She looked at him angrily.
“It’s a good thing you’re going out of town this week, because you have some
decisions to make. You have two women who want you, imagine that. But you have
to make a choice, because I’m not waiting around forever. And if you choose
twenty-one years...well, I’ll be pissed. But eventually I’ll get over it.” She
poked him in the chest with her finger again. “But if you choose me, I expect
you to mean it. No more screwing around with my heart. And when we get to that
anniversary, we’re skipping from twenty to twenty-two. Because I never want to
hear the words twenty-one years again.” She reached in her pocket and
pulled out her garage door opener. She pressed the button, and the door went
up. “Now get the fuck out of here.”
As she walked back into
her house, Steve said, “Can I say one thing?”
“No.” She closed the door
in his face, and locked it.
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Thanks for the feature Ginger! ~ Jamie Hill
ReplyDeleteThanks for being my feature, and I hope you're feeling better.
ReplyDeleteExcellent dramatic dialogue. Love it. Perfect last line. :)
ReplyDeleteJoan
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Wow, this scene packs a wallop! What a dramatic hook.
ReplyDeleteIf this page doesn't make people want to read your book, there is something terribly wrong with them. I have to get it now. :) Wow! Talk about stirring interest. You picked a great scene to share.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone! This is the first in a four book series. The other three books follow their children when each is grown, and span 20 years. At the end of the last book, Steve and Catlin are talking about celebrating their 20th anniversary. They tell everyone it's the last big celebration they'll have, because after that the numbers get kind of jumbled. (Referring to her comment above.) LOL ~ Jamie
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