Today I'm sharing a portion of my upcoming "Mail Order" bride story, Desperation's Bride. I'm really excited to have a new project and I hope you enjoy today's offering. Remember, this is a first draft and not perfect by any means:
Clara sat at the splintery kitchen table, her bare toes
curled against the hard-swept dirt floor while she peeled potatoes for dinner's stew. Two weeks
had passed since she’d made an excuse to mail her last response to Jason, and
now time spun a web around her, making her anxious. “Ma, have you ever seen the train station in
Marysville?”
Her mother looked up from the cupboard where she rolled out
dough for a dried apple pie. “Why would you ask such a strange question?”
Continuing with her peeling, Clara calmed her
breathing. “Just curious, that’s
all. I’ve not been in that part of town
since the railroad began operating. I’ve
always wanted to take a trip in one of those fancy windowed cars.”
“Don’t see that will ever happen.” Ma floured the dough and rolled it flat with
her wooden cylinder. “This is our home and we have no plans to leave.”
“Do you have any idea how far it is to Beatrice, NE?” Clara tried to make her query sound casual.
“Why ever would you ask that? I’m not sure I understand all these
questions.”
“I…I saw a flyer in the mercantile the other day and it made
me wonder…no particular reason.” The lie
tasted bitter on her tongue.
Ma shrugged. “I’ve
not traveled except from Independence to here with your father, but I did hear
women at Church discussing that the Burlington and Missouri River Railroad now
runs from Lincoln to Beatrice. Not sure when that happened.” She plopped her dough into a round tin. “We should be proud to be witness to such
advances in travel. I suffered coming
here on a wagon train with your Pa, and it was definitely not as comfortable as
I imagine a train would be.”
“Oh, tell me about it, Ma, you’ve never shared that story.” Clara put down a potato and her knife and
leaned on her palms.
Ma sighed. “It was a long and tiring ride. We had to leave many of our things behind
because the oxen couldn’t stand the strain of pulling a big wagon and all the
other weight. The days were long, hot, and filled with work from sun-up to
sundown.” Her gaze lowered. “A lot of good folks died on that trip in the
short distance we came…drownings, illness, even a few run over by their own
conveyances.”
“What do you mean by short distance?” Clara cocked her head.
“Your Pa and I joined up in Independence, which is where
most wagon trains depart for Oregon and California. In fact, the trail has been named the Oregon
Trail for the many people seeking new lives out west.” Her eyes brightened. “Luckily, you’re father had researched Kansas
and knew we would pass right through this place. We dropped off here because your father
believed the Overland Stage and the Pony express would put Marysville on the
map, and they have. I’m just sorry he
didn’t live long enough to see and do all he wanted.” She turned her attention back to the pie,
placing cross pieces of dough over the dried apples. “Oh well,” she said. “That was another lifetime, and I’m just
thankful to have a home and family again.”
Clara stifled an inward gasp. Now was not the time to share her intentions. Ma would be very upset at the prospect of her
daughter leaving. The silence begged for
words. “I’m glad you made the trip
safely, Ma, and I’m certain Pa would be very proud of you today. You’re a strong woman and a good wife. I love you very much.”
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I'm making good progress on this one and look forward to announcing a release date soon. Stay tuned...and in the meantime, jump on over to the following blogs and see what's up today:
ttp://connievines.blogspot.com (Connie Vines)
http://yesterrdayrevisitedhere.blogspot.com/ (Juliet Waldron)
Good lord, Mom in ER!
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Nice excerpt! Love your style.