This month's topic is an excerpt dealing with travel or vacation in one of our novels.
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This is just before my hero and heroine take a trip together.
This is also my 1st venture into podcasting. I am also searching for the perfect mic and filter.
My except takes place in Running Springs, Montana before Lynx Maddox and Rachel Scott travel to Lubbock, Texas to meet his family.
They'd never made the trip to Missoula yesterday for supplies, deciding instead to spend the remainder of morning, in bed. Afterwards, Lynx had told her stories and snacked on warmed leftover for dinner.
At first, Lynx's stories of his childhood had made her laugh. He'd been just as much of a hell raiser as a boy, evidently. As he spoke more and more about his family, Rachel's fears mounted and hung over her like a blanket of fog.
Lynx had led a privileged life. And, contrary to Rachel's understanding, his parents were not small-town Texas ranchers. A..J. and Elizabeth Maddox were founding members of community projects, pillars of the Lone Star State. A.J. Maddox lunched with Congressmen at the local cattlemen'a club, and Elizabeth Maddox arranged charity fashion shows.
No matter how much Lynx tried to reassure her to the contrary, Rachel had a feeling Maddox men did not get involved with someone from her background.
She hurried to the kitchen, as if by the act of making breakfast she could cope with everything. Lynx cared about her, she reminded herself. She'd always been stronger when he was near.
But did he love her?
"Of course he does," she whispered, trying to convince herself. Why else would he take her to Texas?
Before Rachel could spoon the first ladle of pancake batter, Lynx was beside her, reaching for the coffee pot.
"I missed you," he said, kissing her on the temple.
She wasn't going to ruin the morning by giving into her fears, Rachel promised herself. Everything will work out for the best--it had to...
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Stop by and read the fascinating travel/ vacation stories other members of our Round Robin have to share this month!
Diane Bator http://dbator.blogspot.ca/
Marie Laval http://marielaval.blogspot.co.uk/
Skye Taylor http://www.skye-writer.com/blogging_by_the_sea
Victoria Chatham http://www.victoriachatham.com
Judith Copek http://lynx-sis.blogspot.com/
Anne Stenhouse http://annestenhousenovelist.wordpress.com/
Helena Fairfax http://www.helenafairfax.com/blog
A.J. Maguire http://ajmaguire.wordpress.com/
Beverley Bateman http://beverleybateman.blogspot.ca/
Dr. Bob Rich https://wp.me/p3Xihq-1GK
Rhobin L Courtright http://www.rhobincourtright.com
Now One just HAS to know how that meeting went. Great descriptive passageReplyDelete
Rachel shows great emotional wants and doubts leading to the upcoming journey! Enjoyed your excerpt.ReplyDelete
Clever of you to focus on the preamble to the trip, rather than the trip itself. Excellent teaser.ReplyDelete
Your post revealed Rachel's vulnerability in a very natural way.ReplyDelete
Very good description of Rachel's internal struggle, her background and the potential conflict ahead.ReplyDelete
Great extract, Connie. Rags to riches is always a great romantic trope. anneReplyDelete