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The flames danced higher when Logan added more dried sage. The fiery fingers reached for the sky while puffs of dark smoke almost made him invisible. He coughed and backed away, fanning the air with his hat.
Harlee sat with her back against a rock. The sun’s heat still radiated
from the stone and eased her sore muscles. She covered her mouth to smother her
laughter; her gaze followed Logan as he spread sleeping rolls on both sides of
the fire.
“It’s a good idea to sleep far apart, Logan. Your mother would be proud
of you.” A sassy tone edged Harlee’s voice.
“I figured you’d be safer on your side.”
“From the animals?”
“From me.” Turning toward her, he grinned. “Are you ready to bed down? We’ll
be leaving early.”
Harlee went to her bedroll and slipped between the uncomfortable wool
blankets. She reached behind her head and loosened her hair from its ribbon. The
canvas on the ground beneath her bedroll crinkled, making her long for the
comfort of the guest room. Sounds from the other side of the fire indicated
Logan had also settled in, and when the crinkling stopped, the only noise was
the crackling and spitting of the flames.
The day’s unrelenting heat turned cold as a million stars twinkled
overhead. In the distant night, a coyote howled. The lonely call raised goose
bumps on Harlee’s arms, and she snuggled deeper in her scratchy bedding. Although
the animal received no response, it sounded far too close.
“I’m cold, Logan.” Harlee sought the comfort of knowing her companion
was awake.
“The fire is still going.” He pointed out the obvious.
“I don’t care. It’s cold and these blankets are making me itch…and I’m
not so sure about nearby animals.”
He propped himself on an elbow. The fire’s reflection showed his
furrowed forehead. “What, exactly, would you like me to do? I put your bed over
there so I wouldn’t be tempted by having you near, and…I can toss another log
on the fire if you want but that’s the bed you’re stuck with.”
“Didn’t you hear the coyote?”
“Yes, but like I said, the fire will keep them away. Sound can’t hurt
you, so let ‘em yowl all they want.”
She sat up, pulling her blanket to beneath her chin. “But what if the
fire dies and you’re asleep?”
“I swear, Harlee. I’m bone tired and we have to get up early.
Would you
like me to track the animal down and shoot it?”
“No…don’t do that.” She shook her head, swaying her locks from
side-to-side.
“Then what?”
“I want to sleep closer to you.”
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If you get a page that has an old post...just realize the life sometimes happens, and then check back next week. I've missed a few myself...summer time is camping time and we don't always have Internet access. Hope you keep coming back.
Looks like another winner, Ginger. And love the cover.
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