Hi, and welcome back to Dishin' It Out. I was on a little hiatus last week, and I sure missed following my favorites on SSS. Today, I'm continuing with my current WIP, Hattie's Hero, which will be an historical time-travel if I ever get it finished. It started with a YA heroine, but I fear she's going to be a senior citizen before long. *lol* Just a quick reminder; Hattie is preparing to leave the orphanage, answering an ad she found posted at Cronin's mercantile.
Here's my offering, and I hope you enjoy it:
[Hattie's] Her palms turned
moist the minute she spied a dapper gentleman standing outside the mercantile. He
wore the black Coachman’s hat Mister Cronin had indicated he would.
Despite her
churning innards, she closed the gap between them on leaden legs and managed a
weak smile. His tailored charcoal frock coat, starched white shirt and
perfectly pressed trousers indicated a man of means. A thick moustache, broad
shoulders, and angular jaw made him quite attractive, but clearly impatient if
his tapping foot was any indication. A glance down at her tacky apparel brought
warmth to her cheeks. If her employment rested on her looks…
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Great descriptions here. I can feel her anxiety and "see" him.
ReplyDeleteEnticing six, Ginger. Definitely makes me want to read more...
ReplyDeleteGreat six, with perfect description, bothe of the man and of Hattie's feelings.
ReplyDeleteInteresting, lots of great description. I hope her future is better than her past - terrific excerpt!
ReplyDeleteSo much fretting! I hope looks don't matter too :-)
ReplyDeleteI love this story. Can't wait to read more. :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely six. I'm thinking 'Jane Eyre'. Hope her future turns out as nice!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing 6!
ReplyDeleteGreat description. I can't wait for you to finish this one.
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